Nowadays, many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?
In the modern age when we live, a variety of doctors say that many
people
have some sleep issues Use synonyms
such
as insomnia and these problems are affecting our lives in bad ways.
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People
sleep less than yesterday so in the following paragraphs, I am going to tell what are the major problems with lack of sleep and how can we fix Use synonyms
that
.
First and foremost, we have to find issues in order to fix that. Correct pronoun usage
them
According to
recent research, human beings tend to consume much more Linking Words
caffeine
in the past 50 years and Use synonyms
this
can lead to short sleep.Linking Words
Also
, nowadays, mankind Linking Words
works
in offices because of high income Correct subject-verb agreement
work
however
they spend energy less than other Linking Words
people
and humans who Use synonyms
live
in past times. Wrong verb form
lived
Besides
, the human race eats a lot of junk food Linking Words
hence
their meals don’t have any balance and Linking Words
this
type of diet Linking Words
have
a bad effect on our sleep. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Moreover
, Linking Words
according to
Dr John Cassel, fresh Linking Words
air
is impacted the human brain which special area for sleep and we sleep more quality thanks to fresh Use synonyms
air
. as I said above some Use synonyms
people
do office work and there is no fresh Use synonyms
air
in offices.
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Secondly
, in Linking Words
this
paragraph, let us take a look at solutions. When we examine older Linking Words
people
, their rate of taking Use synonyms
caffeine
are minimum level Use synonyms
therefore
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people
have to reduce taking Use synonyms
caffeine
. Use synonyms
This
way has many benefits for us. Linking Words
For example
, the most important benefit is we sleep well and that can cause our budget because we don’t spend a lot of money on Linking Words
caffeine
. Meanwhile, for good periods of sleep, we must do training because we don’t Use synonyms
any
chance of a change of our occupation. It is far from reality. Add a missing verb
have any
Furthermore
, when we begin to do some exercise, we have to change our diet. Humankind avoids junk foods and must eat vegetables, proteins, and carbohydrates Linking Words
such
as cucumber,chicken, and rice. Linking Words
People
have to take fresh Use synonyms
air
in their free time. Use synonyms
Thus
, in their free ,time Linking Words
people
can go to parks and forests.
In conclusion, there are many reasons for lack of sleep Use synonyms
for instance
taking an overdose of Linking Words
caffeine
, little movement and harmful feeding habits Use synonyms
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while
these reasons, humans can have quality sleep easily if they Change preposition
For
do
some changes in their lives Verb problem
make
such
as doing exercises and feeding healthy.Linking Words
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