IT IS GENERALLY ACCEPTED THAT EXERCISE IS GOOD FOR CHILDREN AND TEENAGERS. THERFORE, PHYSICAL EDUCATION AND SPORT SHOULD BE COMPULSORY FOR ALL STUDENTS IN ALL SCHOOLS. WHAT DO YOU THINK ?
Health is one of the most important aspects of our lives.It has been implemented in most institutions to provide
children
with physical activities
to keep them fit.I strongly,
believe in doing so we can produce healthier individuals in future.
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Firstly
,with the growing number of obese ,children
it is important to introduce them to sports like running ,playing football and other outdoor games.In doing so they burn extra calories and fat and become more healthy.For instance
,it has been reported in a recent newspaper the rate of obesity has declined with more children
being involved in playing and reducing the intake of fast food.
Secondly
, exercising on regular basis makes us less ill.With the growing pressure on children
's studies
it has been seen that pupils are less involved in extra Add a comma
,studies
activities
and they become nerds.Teenagers, nowadays are more into technology focusing on mobile phones and as a ,
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Instead
of spending their leisure time doing some physical ,,
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activity
they spend time on less useful resources.It is important that educational institutions impose strict rules on pupils to participate in extracurricular Add a comma
,activity
activities
which are not only helpful for their physical health but also
for mental peace.For example
,children
with too much involvement in studies go into depression because of the pressure to excel in academics.It is the responsibility of the school authorities to encourage such
students to take part in other activities
which will help to lower their burden.
To conclude
,exercising plays a pivotal role in shaping an individual to become more fit and healthy free from certain illnesses.It also
helps to improve mental health.Submitted by mudassir1219 on
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