Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
The consumption of high levels of
sugar
has been linked to health
problems, including obesity, type 2 diabetes and heart disease. As a result
, some people argue that making sugary products
more expensive could be an effective way to encourage people to consume less sugar
. In my opinion, this
strategy is understandable and could be effective enough to improve public health
, but there are other efficient alternatives as well.
On the one hand, there are
some evidence that Change the verb form
is
price
can influence consumer behaviour. For example
, studies show that increasing the price
of sugary drinks can lead to reduced consumption. In fact, in Mexico, a new tax on sugary drinks was introduced in 2014 and the total consumption decreased by 12% in the first year. There are more countries, including France and the UK, where sugar
taxes
have been implemented over the past ten years. However
, extra taxes
on sugary products
add more burden to low-income groups.
On the other hand
, sugar
is an essential nutrient for human bodies to generate energy quickly on a daily basis. If all sugary products
were increased in price
by governments, low-income households would suffer from malnutrition, which leads to another health
issue. Instead
of sugar
taxes
, providing education and awareness campaigns about the health
risks associated with a high
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high-sugar
sugar
and high-fat diet. This
can be done through schools and community centers
. Change the spelling
centres
Moreover
, encouraging physical activities through community initiatives such
as walking or cycling groups, sports teams, and other activities can help promote a more active lifestyle.
In conclusion, sugar
taxes
or increased price
of sugary Fix the agreement mistake
prices
products
are the
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apply
one
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apply
of
the options to reduce Change preposition
apply
sugar
intake, but I believe that other ways, such
as education and active
lifestyle, would be more beneficial to everyone, regardless of social status.Correct article usage
an active
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