The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figure.
The figure below illustrates the secondary/ high school
teachers
' income
over
five different countries in 2009. Change preposition
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Overall
, while
the Luxembourg teachers
seemed to have the highest salaries
, the ones in Australia
achieved the lowest over times
.
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To begin
with, as we can see, teachers
in Luxembourg were the ones receiving the most dreaming income
, starting with 80,000 dollars, which was
nearly tripled the Unnecessary verb
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salaries
of the teachers
in Australia
and was about two times higher than the teachers
' salaries
in other countries. The most dramatic increase in the
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income
was in Australia
and Japan. For the 15-year-experience teachers
, the income
would be doubled in the comparison with the salary in the beginning.
Moreover
, the Denmark and Australia
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Australian
teachers
tended to reach the best salary for the shortest time, 8 and 9 years, respectively, while
the teachers
in other nations had to spend over 30 years to earn the top salaries
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