The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
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The provided line graph illustrates the information on the
birth
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rates
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of two different countries,
China
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and the
USA
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from 1920 to 2000.
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, throughout 80 years, as we can see, the
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rates
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in the two nations both decreased and the lines tended to fluctuate mostly between 1930 and 1955.
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with, it is obvious that at
first,
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the
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rates
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in the two communities shared the same slight fluctuation in the 1920-1930 period. From 1930 to 1955, the
rates
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significantly changed, reaching the top in the year 1950. During that time, the
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rate in
China
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accounted for 20%, 1.5 times higher than the number in the
USA
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. In the 1955-2000 period, it is undeniable that the
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rates
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in
USA
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and
China
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shared a downward trend, reaching the bottom at 2% in 1980 and 8% in 1990, respectively.
Last
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but not least, after 80 years, the
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rate in the
USA
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was triple the
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rate in
China
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rates, china, usa with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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