【V1】There are both problems and benefits for high school students study plays and works of theatres written centuries ago. Discuss and use your own experience as examples.【V2】Do you think school should have curriculum asking students to play old dramas and works of theatres centuries ago?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Classical theater
  • Historical context
  • Cultural context
  • Social norms
  • Universal themes
  • Linguistic skills
  • Critical thinking
  • Interpretation
  • Comprehension
  • Analytical abilities
  • Appreciation for the arts
  • Disinterest
  • Relatability
  • Stereotypes
  • Outdated norms
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