Should people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the number of people that believe main workers like
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and engineers should
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in the
country
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where they trained,
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other
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of people think that they should be free to
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everywhere if they wish. Personally, I am considered that working free abroad has more advantages
to
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personal growth First of all, all
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country
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countries
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need professionals like
doctor
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doctors
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and engineers but the government can not require the
knowledge
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,
that is
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why student improve their
knowledge
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abroad and most of them come to
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or
her
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own
country
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to develop
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arroundings
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surroundings
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, in
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Kazakhstan
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we have a lot of international students
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the world and most of them
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India
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, they become to
Kazakhstan
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to study
in
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medicine
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then
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come back to
India
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to be
high paid
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worker
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. For
me
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it means that
India
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has
big
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population and for all of them can not require
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knowledge
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and
work
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.
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why their student study around the world. But in deep
of
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their
soul
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they want to be in
India
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because it is their hometown.
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, by studying in another
country
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they will have more
knowledge
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and experience.
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, if we compare Germany and
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by their medicine, of
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Germany will win.
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, it is one of
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developing
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country
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and most of our Kazakh students apply to Germany for medicine university and took there the best
knowledge
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.
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, they do their practical training abroad to be flexible in every kind of situation that will
may
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happen in
Kazakhstan
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. After
,
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they come back to
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their hometown
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they may be the best in their occupation. It will
also
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affect
on
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a
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personal development.
However
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, they will learn one more language. In conclusion, we can not choose
for
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someone
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life, they should do it by
theirself
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themselves
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. Personally, I would recommend to people choose
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work
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and study in another
country
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and come back to
hometown
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their hometown
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to develop it for the best.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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