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Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the fuel resources in the world. To what extent do you agree?

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In the past,
air
travel
 was just a dream for many.
However
, 2 brothers, called the Right brothers, made that into a reality. Since the invention of modern aeroplanes, there have been many questions about the pollution it causes
as well as
 using up the fuel resources in the world and if
air
travel
 should be restricted. I believe that
air
travel
 should not be restricted.
One
 of the biggest advantages of
air
travel
 is the ability to
travel
 across the world from a few hours to a few days depending on the flight path. In the past, a journey from
one
 country to another would take at least a few days to weeks by land or sea.
Whereas
 now , we can hop on an aeroplane and visit friends,
family
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and family
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 and even go on a hassle-free vacation.
For example
, If
one
 of your family members is hospitalized and they are in another country,
air
travel
 would be the fastest way to reach that family member.
Hence
,
air
travel
 is the most efficient way of travelling long distances.
Secondly
, another advantage of
air
travel
 is that travelling by
air
 is
one
 of the safest ways to
travel
. Did you know that you have a higher chance of dying by falling down from your bed as compared to travelling on an aeroplane? People have
the
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a
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 sense of security when they are on a plane
as well as
 the airline company puts the customer's safety
above all
. In conclusion,
Although
 there are pros and cons to
air
travel
, the pros outweigh the cons
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