In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while the other works full-time to earn money. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In

this

modern era,

parents

are more flexible to do some activities, apart from raising their

children

, they could

also

work to earn money. By doing those responsibilities, there are some advantages and disadvantages which would emerge. I will discuss it in

this

essay. The first benefit of having a job

while

taking care

children

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is

parents

could monitor their

children

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children's

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anytime

due to

around

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them.

Therefore

, the

parents

could serve their

children

for

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their needs,

such

as

give

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foods

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food

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or

replace

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diapers, which make all those activities in

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the parents

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parents

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parents'

parent's

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control;

therefore

, they are not concerned about their

children

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children's

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condition.

In addition

, having

a

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children

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children

certainly has many needs;

therefore

,

parents

would not be

worry

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about fulfilling them.

This

would make

children

growth

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well

due to

the good treatment from

parents

. Turning to

downsides

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the downsides

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of

this

, there are some moments in working that make people

being

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hurry. In

this

case,

parents

who have

the

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moments,

such

as

deadline

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deadlines

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,

rejection

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and rejection

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would bring them to be unhappy.

As a result

,

this

situation could affect their feeling and their concentration to take care

their

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children

and

got

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neglected

from

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parents

.

Moreover

, having a full-time job could not be done

along with

other important

responsibility

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responsibilities

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,

such

as raising

children

. It is because they must choose which one to be prioritized. In conclusion,

Parents

could control

to

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their

children

although

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while

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working.

However

,

children

would be possibly neglected

from

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their

parents

if there is a negative from work.