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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
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 certain individual's
belief
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, teens should engage in social services for free during their leisure, considering that it would be beneficial to
teen
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 population and
other
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society as well. In my opinion, I agree with the
above mentioned
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 statement
for
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a considerable amount. Doing charity chores does make one feel some kind of
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fulfilment which be either spiritual or mental. Helping someone can always bring a smile, more frequently to the
reciever
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receiver
.
Moreover
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 it will be a pleasant memory
to
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 the giver as well. In
modern
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 world, young people
usually
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invlove
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involve
involved
 in illegal activities
such
 as consuming drugs,
thefts
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, gambling
an
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etc. Adolescence is the age that they
becomes
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 naive and stubborn.
Therefore
 more people try to lure them to wrongdoings. Being
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irresponsible young adults, they would easily commit
this
 sort of
actions
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 without any acknowledgement
of
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 parents or guardians.
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, since
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technology has developed to
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 peak, more youngsters are commonly addicted to
videogames
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 and
to
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social media.
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 they spend a comparatively great deal of time regarding these.
Besides
, physical endurance and strength decrease as they would rarely allocate any time to do body movements. Free service will provide a sense of gratitude as the provider wouldn't get materialistic gain out of it. It enhances
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empathy and
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a feeling
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 of responsibility, the very emotions teens are lacking the most. By including them, more
man power
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manpower
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 can be used in social services,
hence
 the outcome is greater. In conclusion, I believe that
younger
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the younger
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 generation should perform charity acts as a free service in their spare time,
due to
 the numerous advantages that can be obtained.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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