The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
this
diagram illustrates information about the process of
sugar
and how it is produced by the
cane
.
Firstly
, canes need to grow up for 12 to 18 months, only
then
harvested by people or machines.
Secondly
, the special machine crushes
sugar
cane
into
juice
, and
then
the
juice
will purify by a limestone filter.
Thirdly
, purifying
juice
will become syrup by heating, after that separating
sugar
crystals from the syrup.
Finally
,
sugar
crystals are through dring and cooling so that we can gain
sugar
which we see every day.
Overall
, there are seven steps to produce
sugar
from
cane
including growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying
juice
, evaporating, centrifuging, drying and cooling. The process is beginning with the
cane
growing and end with drying and cooling.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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