The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts
gives
data about the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.There are five powers.They are Change the verb form
give
hydropower
,oil
,nucleat
power , coal and Correct your spelling
nuclear
nafural
gas.
Looking at the graph as a whole,Correct your spelling
natural
oil
was the most use
energy between 1980 and 2003.Replace the word
used
On the other hand
, hydropower
was the lowest from 1983 to 2003.
In detail,hydropower
was no change at 4% this
Change preposition
in this
priode
, and Correct your spelling
period
also
nuclear power remained all most constant at around 22% from 1983 to 2003.On the other hand
, the proportion of coal decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
at
10% between 1983 and 2003,Change preposition
by
then
the rate of Correct word choice
and then
hydropower
down at
4% from 1983 to 2003.In constant,the proportion of natural gas Change preposition
to
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
at
10% until 2003.As you can see, Change preposition
by
the
Correct article usage
apply
oil
is the most use
in Replace the word
used
the
all,and Correct article usage
apply
also
the
Correct article usage
apply
hydropower
is the proporption
of lowest in Correct your spelling
proportion
the
all.So the rate of Correct article usage
apply
hydropower
and oil
Add a missing verb
was different
different
at around 36% in 1983 and 2003.Replace the word
differed
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hydropower, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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