The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
A graph displayed an increase in tourism to a specific
island
in the Carribeans between 2010 and 2017. The line graphs compared those who visited on cruise ships with others who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the destination enjoyed a significant upward trend in its tourism during a Linking Words
seven year
period. Both, the total numbers of people, and those coming by boat increased three times and quadrupled respectively. Those preferring to stay on the Add a hyphen
seven-year
island
itself remained relatively stable.
As mentioned, visitors who journeyed on cruises saw a steep and steady rise after 2012 which was the trough of the curve with 0.2 Use synonyms
million
. After that, the graph markedly rose till its peak Use synonyms
at the end
of the documented period in 2017 to 2 Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the Linking Words
overall
statistic had its sharpest upward movement after 2012, levelling off for one year between 2015 and 2016 before skyrocketing to 3.5 Linking Words
million
people. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
respresents
an astronomical 350% increase.
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represents
In contrast
to Linking Words
this
, travellers staying on the Linking Words
island
had a short but sharp climb for one year before levelling off to a steady state for three years at around 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. Between 2015 and 2016 numbers decreased slightly but were on the rise again Use synonyms
for
2017.Change preposition
in
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