some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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comes to all
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people without seeing who they are and the responses are not the same for all people. Some groups think when a bad
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comes,
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undesired
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job or having less money,
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best
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to face it is just accept it. The other groups argue that a better
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is to try and improve
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such
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a
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. I side with those who argue that trying and improving
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situation
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is a good
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.
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with, accepting a bad position is a better
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for some
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communities
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because sometimes they have a motto like
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it flow.
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, they tend to do that because they do not have an idea
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to overcome that kind of environment.
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, they
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do not possess the basic quality
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life,
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as hard work.
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, the teachers in a village have a low income and the others think that being a teacher in a village is not a desired job, which is not what many groups dreams of.
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, they tend to accept
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such
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condition
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and just let it go.
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, people should try to deal with hard circumstances because we can learn many things from that
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. If we do that, we will become a better character day by day.
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, fresh graduates maybe do not have a satisfactory job in their first career. Meanwhile,
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can try another chance by applying to the other company
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suitable to their soul until they get what they want.
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, the process of trying itself gives us many lessons,
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as hard work and persistence and unconsciously it shapes us to be a better
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people
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each day.
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, a hard position can come to us without seeing who the person is.
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, we should try to handle
that circumstances
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by trying another chance rather than just
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it.
As a result
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, it will lead us to become better characters because we can learn many things from it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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