some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A hard
situation
comes to all the
people without seeing who they are and the responses are not the same for all people. Some groups think when a bad Correct article usage
apply
situation
comes, such
as undesired
job or having less money, Add an article
an undesired
a
best Change the article
the
way
to face it is just accept it. The other groups argue that a better way
is to try and improve the
Correct article usage
apply
such
a situation
. I side with those who argue that trying and improving bad
Add an article
the bad
situation
is a good Fix the agreement mistake
situations
way
.
To begin
with, accepting a bad position is a better way
for some community
because sometimes they have a motto like Fix the agreement mistake
communities
let
it flow. Correct your spelling
Let
Moreover
, they tend to do that because they do not have an idea how
to overcome that kind of environment. Change preposition
of how
Additionally
, they also
do not possess the basic quality in
life, Change preposition
of
such
as hard work. For instance
, the teachers in a village have a low income and the others think that being a teacher in a village is not a desired job, which is not what many groups dreams of. Then
, they tend to accept that
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apply
such
condition
and just let it go.
Correct article usage
a condition
However
, people should try to deal with hard circumstances because we can learn many things from that situation
. If we do that, we will become a better character day by day. For example
, fresh graduates maybe do not have a satisfactory job in their first career. Meanwhile, the
can try another chance by applying to the other company Correct your spelling
they
that is
suitable to their soul until they get what they want. Besides
, the process of trying itself gives us many lessons, such
as hard work and persistence and unconsciously it shapes us to be a better person
each day.
Fix the agreement mistake
people
To sum up
, a hard position can come to us without seeing who the person is. Therefore
, we should try to handle that circumstances
by trying another chance rather than just Change the determiner
that circumstance
those circumstances
accept
it. Wrong verb form
accepting
As a result
, it will lead us to become better characters because we can learn many things from it.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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