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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many students are choosing to study online instead of face - to - face education. what is the advantages and disadvantages

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As technology has affected every part of our lives, education would not be the exception
as a result
 of the latest events happening in the world, online
classes
 have become the newest tool of universities around the globe. In
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 I will expose why the advantages of
this
 new change outweigh its disadvantages. Some may believe that teaching through a computer will not only decrease its content veracity but
also
 make it harder for
students
 to fully focus on the subject. Admittedly, online tools
such
 as Zoom Meetings will never be able to fully replace a face-to-face class, but the teacher's role will be extremely determinant when it comes to
students
' attention and interest. In fact, in 2021 Harvard University released a satisfaction survey where undergraduates gave their opinion of the main distractors in their lectures and both commuting issues and deadlines anxiety was way more popular than the way
classes
 were provided. Others, myself included, are strong defenders of the online method simply because allows more
students
 to complete their professional training.
Firstly
, online
classes
 are usually not as expensive as the ones imparted offline, giving a more affordable option to thousands of
students
 with a tight budget.
Secondly
, taking a course from our own desks at home makes it simpler to fit
this
 into busy schedules
such
 as the ones of young parents who are trying to study, work and raise at the same time. In conclusion, despite the flaws of online
classes
, it gives a chance to many
students
 who without
this
 option would not be able to study at all and
that is
 without a doubt an unbeatable advantage.
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