Some people feel that responsibility for providing education should borne only by the government and private education should be banned. What are the main advantages of banning private education? Are there any circumstances where private education should be allowed? What is you opinion on the matter?

The majority of pupils think that lawmakers have a duty to provide free and quality
education
and they must ban private
sectors
of
education
. In my opinion, prohibiting private
sectors
is not a great idea,as there is no quality
education
provided in
government
institutes
.
To begin
with, a large number of infants are admitted to private
sectors
on daily basis,paying a high amount and seeking
education
.
However
, if these colleges and schools are banned,parents have to send their children to
government
sectors
and pay no money.
Furthermore
,there will be an improvement in the
education
system and every person whether poor or from the elite class will learn together and seek the same
education
.
For example
; In Canada, the majority of private
sectors
are banned and
education
is provided free to their nationals which
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a quite good impact on reducing the illiteracy rate.
On the other hand
,private
sectors
are known for providing standard
education
, and many educated and trained teachers are teaching in these
institutes
, and
due to
the
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ban they will become jobless.
Hence
, the
government
should transfer these
institutes
into semi-
government
departments,
due to
which,these private
sectors
will be funded and will be officially run by the
government
.
Then
, the student can have a high-quality
education
for less amount.
For example
; In Pakistan,in the 1970s a lot of private academic
institutes
were taken by the
government
and were converted into semi-
government
institutes
In conclusion, local governments should do partnership with private
sectors
and make them semi-
government
in order to provide quality and low-cost
education
to students.
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