The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates
the
all process of making soft cheese briefly. The main five steps of production are mixing, cooling, fermentation, evaporation, and cooling.
Remove the article
apply
Overall
the hole
process requires nearly 24 Correct your spelling
whole
hours
, additional ingredients, heating ,and mixing devices.
Firstly
water and milk blended
together in the mixer. After the mixing stage, Add a missing verb
are blended
occured
mixture would send into the cooling chamber for 2 Correct your spelling
occurred
hours
at 5 degrees. The mixture completes all these process
Change the determiner
processes
with
its liquid form. Before the fermentation step, Change preposition
in
operator
Add an article
the operator
have
to add salt Change the verb form
has
to begin
the activity of fermentation. This
phase requires a heat resource for next
2 Correct article usage
the next
hours
. At this
stage
all mixture Add a comma
,stage
change
its form. The Change the verb form
changes
last
two steps are longer than the other phases. Temperature
reaches Add an article
The temperature
to
100 degrees in the evaporation stage. Evaporated water molecules went out as steam Change preposition
apply
directy
Correct your spelling
directly
to
Change preposition
apply
outside
of the system. Eventually thick liquid is ready to Add an article
the outside
condansate
with cooling in the Correct your spelling
condensate
last
chamber. The cooling phase provides filtering the
final compound during 8 Change preposition
of the
hours
of resting at 5 degrees. After by-products removed
from soft Add a missing verb
are removed
cheese
it is ready for Add a comma
,cheese
consuming
as soft cheese.Replace the word
consumption
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