Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It’s controversial whether the availability of

technology

nowadays can make wealthy people wealthier

while

worsening the financial state of poor communities,

this

essay will examine both points of view,

besides

my proper opinion, On one hand, undoubtedly

technology

is the key major for various businessmen to double or triple their fortune, because it provides businesses with a variety of tools in order to enhance the quality of services, predict the drawbacks,

furthermore

, reach consumers widely in a few seconds as an example,

along with

what wealthy individuals already possess,

technology

comes to make the investment more clear and easy to hold,

for instance

, two years ago, I met a wholesaler of wood,

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the stock was not bought because he has no client, when

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suggested turning into the social media and target companies with the same interest,

consequently

, in about one month, half of the stock was bought,

On the other hand

,

technology

has enhanced employability among the low community,

in other words

, platforms provide unlimited job offers in order to work as a freelancer

as well as

build an online business without a budget,

for example

, recently the POD, the Print on demand activity is the source of income for a lot of poor communities,

moreover

, many startups become big companies commencing from scratch, undisputedly true story,

for example

, the influencers could earn millions of dollars only by posting good content on social media, like TIKTOK and Youtube, it does not matter whether you are rich or poor, In my opinion and

to conclude

, I believe that

technology

gives more opportunities to poor people to reach their dreams compared to rich people,

in other words

, it decreases the distance between both categories,