You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph
give
that data about different countries of residence of Change the verb form
gives
oversease
Correct your spelling
overseas
students
in make comparisons where relevant.There are four countries.They are Indonesia
,Hong
kong
Malaysia and Singapore.
Looking at the graph as a whole,four countries Correct your spelling
Kong
Add a missing verb
have siginificant
siginificant
movement up and down. Correct your spelling
significant
In
Change preposition
apply
Indonesia
was the most proportion
of residence
of overseas Replace the word
residents
students
in Australia.
In detail, in 1982, the proportion
of overseas students
in Australia is largest
Correct article usage
the largest
in
Change preposition
of
four
Correct article usage
the four
countires
, after 8 years that the rate of Correct your spelling
countries
counties
students
in Hong
Kong
is the largest. The proportion
of students
of
Change preposition
in
Hong
Kong
slow decrease until 1986,then
sudden
Replace the word
suddenly
a
rise in 1988 Correct article usage
apply
while
in Hong
Kong
over the proportion
in Indonesia
. In adition
, Correct your spelling
addition
students
of
Change preposition
in
Hong
Kong
remaind
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remained
remains
remind
all
most Correct determiner usage
the
constaint
at around 10 between 1990 and 1996. Correct your spelling
constant
constraint
Morover
, the rate Correct your spelling
Moreover
students
of Indonesia
Change preposition
in Indonesia
more
than 10 from 1994 to 2000.in Add a missing verb
was more
aditon
, the Correct your spelling
addition
proportion
of student
in Malaysia and Fix the agreement mistake
students
Singapore
insignificant movement go up, Change noun form
Singapore's
then
in 2000,they rise more than1982.Submitted by hatsudaya706 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, indonesia, hong, kong, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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