Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a strong argument that every youngster should have a right to be admitted to higher
education
irrespective of their academic ability. In my opinion, although
I understand education
should be accessible to everyone equally, I disagree with this
argument. I will cover my reasons in this
essay.
Firstly
, it is important for students
to feel comfortable and keep motivation
for learning. If all schools are available for everyone, Replace the word
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students
' levels
would vary and some students
, who can not follow the speed of lessons, might feel left behind from
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For example
, if foreign students
, who do not have sufficient English proficiency, enroll
in a college program, they will highly likely have difficulty understanding the content of the lessons.
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Secondly
, when it comes to teamwork assignments, it is hard for students
to cooperate with each other due to
the different education
levels
. As a result
, superior students
need to do most of the assignments by themselves, which adds an extra burden on them. This
circumstance is not fair. For instance
, when a group consisting of a variety of English levels
needs to make a presentation, higher level
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higher-level
students
need to take a lead and do more work to get a better grade.
To conclude
, I disagree with the opinion that university
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universities
college
should allow admission without a minimum level of Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
education
. If students
have different levels
, some may give up and quit school. Teamwork between students
will also
cause additional
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an additional
burden
on more advanced Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
students
. Therefore
, I believe that the minimum level of education
for admission actually benefits students
as a whole.Submitted by nanamach87 on
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