Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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as actors, singers, and sportsmen earn high wages for their achievements. Some Linking Words
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their effort. They invest their most time in acquiring some must skills for a long time. Linking Words
For example
, speed skaters usually have started to learn their sports since they were primary school students. Linking Words
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, their results make more profits for companies and countries. After 'The Squid Game' made a big hit around the world, that film company earned more money than investment. Linking Words
Furthermore
, foreigners got interested in Korean traditional cultures, following the same games in dramas.
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, in Korea, the public needs to study for almost 8 years to be a doctor. They endure that period to be effective Linking Words
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, individuals who are in danger to protect society need to get high salaries. If not, fewer Linking Words
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In conclusion, paying entertainers highly is not excessive. Use synonyms
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, experts and a must job for society need to be paid highly.Linking Words
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