Some people think that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely seperate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although
it is sometimes thought that it is a better way to do some social activity with Linking Words
office's
coworkers at Change noun form
office
weekends
and after Use synonyms
company's
Change noun form
company
hour
, other Fix the agreement mistake
hours
people
believe that it is vital to Use synonyms
seperate
working and social Correct your spelling
separate
life
. In my opinion, I consider that socialization with peers helps Use synonyms
people
learn more about Use synonyms
them
and Correct pronoun usage
themselves
social
Correct pronoun usage
their social
activities
.
On the one hand, some Use synonyms
people
think that helping in social Use synonyms
works
with coworkers is really a nice thought and I agree. The reason why I agree Fix the agreement mistake
work
Linking Words
this
statement is that workers will know each other feelings for Change preposition
with this
social
Add an article
a social
life
even after Use synonyms
company's
Correct article usage
the company's
hour
. Fix the agreement mistake
hours
This
might Linking Words
be increase
their bonding with each other, and Change the verb form
increase
this
bonding will help in the company's work. Linking Words
Moreover
, those adults who spend time Linking Words
to do
some social Change the verb form
doing
activities
at Use synonyms
weekends
will helpful for society in any Use synonyms
hazard
Replace the word
hazardous
situations
. Fix the agreement mistake
situation
For instance
, a group of adults who always do social Linking Words
activities
like helping other poor Use synonyms
people
and like that. They have always references Use synonyms
of
all fields and might be helpful for Change preposition
from
the
society.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better to Linking Words
sepreate
working Correct your spelling
separate
life
from social Use synonyms
life
. Some Use synonyms
people
think that they Use synonyms
working
with Wrong verb form
work
people
which are different in Use synonyms
religious
. Replace the word
religion
Therefore
, they can not share Linking Words
there
time with them to do Replace the word
their
such
Linking Words
kind
of social Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
activities
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, some Linking Words
people
have Use synonyms
some
busy schedule or Correct determiner usage
a
to
do some business at Fix the infinitive
apply
weekends
for earning extra money. Use synonyms
For instance
, some Linking Words
people
are doing Use synonyms
part time
jobs at Add a hyphen
part-time
weekends
to complete their goals.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
people
may vary in their opinions between choosing Use synonyms
working
with colleagues for social Change the verb form
to work
life
or not, I think that adults stand a better chance to know their coworkers and current social issues and how to solve them together.Use synonyms
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