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Some people think that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely seperate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Although
 it is sometimes thought that it is a better way to do some social activity with
office's
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 coworkers at
weekends
 and after
company's
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company
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hour
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, other
people
 believe that it is vital to
seperate
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separate
 working and social
life
. In my opinion, I consider that socialization with peers helps
people
 learn more about
them
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themselves
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 and
social
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their social
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activities
. On the one hand, some
people
 think that helping in social
works
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work
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 with coworkers is really a nice thought and I agree. The reason why I agree
this
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 statement is that workers will know each other feelings for
social
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a social
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life
 even after
company's
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the company's
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hour
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hours
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.
This
 might
be increase
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 their bonding with each other, and
this
 bonding will help in the company's work.
Moreover
, those adults who spend time
to do
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doing
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 some social
activities
 at
weekends
 will helpful for society in any
hazard
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hazardous
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situations
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situation
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.
For instance
, a group of adults who always do social
activities
 like helping other poor
people
 and like that. They have always references
of
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 all fields and might be helpful for
the
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apply
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society.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better to
sepreate
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separate
 working
life
 from social
life
. Some
people
 think that they
working
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work
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 with
people
 which are different in
religious
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religion
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.
Therefore
, they can not share
there
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their
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 time with them to do
such
kind
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kinds
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 of social
activities
.
Additionally
, some
people
 have
some
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a
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 busy schedule or
to
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apply
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do some business at
weekends
 for earning extra money.
For instance
, some
people
 are doing
part time
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part-time
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 jobs at
weekends
 to complete their goals. In conclusion,
while
people
 may vary in their opinions between choosing
working
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to work
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 with colleagues for social
life
 or not, I think that adults stand a better chance to know their coworkers and current social issues and how to solve them together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • supportive work environment
  • personal growth
  • diverse perspectives
  • conflicts of interest
  • professional boundaries
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • innovation
  • collaborative projects
  • hierarchy
  • authority
  • nuanced decision
  • social and cultural expectations
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