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Some say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is said that
kids
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’ leisure
time
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activities
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 ought to be planned by their mother and father,
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 others believe that they should be free to opt for what they prefer to do in their spare
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. It seems to me that
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children
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 are free in their free
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, they should have their own option to do what they want to. On the one hand, parents should organize any spare
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activities
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 for their
kids
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.
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, a child who does projects in their leisure
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 might be productive and get used to not wasting
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. The more
kids
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 do useful
activities
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, the more they will mature quickly.
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,
children
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 might not suffer from harmful things
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 as drugs, cigarettes and alcohol. Because
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kids
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 who use their free
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 for beneficial things
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 as sports and eating healthy foods will only focus on their careers in most cases because of a satisfactory environment. That’s why parents should worry about what their
children
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 do in their leisure
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activities
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.
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, youngsters should be independent in their spare
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.
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, when they have free
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, they can spend that
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 on useful things
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 as volunteering job, reading books and improving their interpersonal skills.
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, most
children
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 prefer playing online games to doing sports.
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, they might be addicted to playing online games so they have to spend their free
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 effectively. To my mind, being free what
kids
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 do in their spare
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 is unsatisfactory. In conclusion, the father and mother are crucially important in a child’s entity. I believe that
kids
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 should pay attention to their parents whole their life.
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