The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010

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pie chart describes the average of spending funds in certain Asias which are Japan and Malaysia in 2010.

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,Japan seemed to have almost balanced percentages in Housing, Transport, food and Other goods and services, there was only a noticeably had got low score in

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. Let's start with Other goods and services which had 29% of the most popular sections in the household.

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food got 24%, Housing which had had 21%, Transport 20%, and

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6% for

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in Malaysia, there was more unevenness within the departments, which is 34% for Housing, followed by 27% for Food and Other goods and services goes by a slightly low 26%.

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, Transport got a ratio of 10% and only 3% for

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, Japan was more even amongst departments than Malaysia in 2010.

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between those countries that

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was the lowest number of all.

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The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010

In some countries, it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Is this a positive or negative development?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Young people committing crimes should be treated the same as adults by the authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?