Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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New immigrants are often reported as victims of domestic violence in Taiwan, saying that they do not have friends around them to help
due to
language barriers. From my point of view, I disagree that language disfluency will lead to social isolation or even make one suffer difficulties in daily life.
To begin
with, languages are not necessities in connecting with others. Common interests can be found through sharing something which is beyond speech,
such
as music or paintings.
For example
, I have a neighbour who is from Vietnam and she always cooks her meal as I
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mine. The special smell of her exotic dishes spreads through the windows of my house. Once upon a time, I met her outside the garden and asked her for the recipes.
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the beginning of our friendship.
Thus
, it shows that there is some happiness that can be shared without words.
Although
some foreigners might get frustrated when they come into a situation
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communication, like describing their illness conditions or explaining the hairstyles they want with accurate words, there are some other workarounds to resolve these problems.
For instance
, patients who are not fluent in local languages can look up the words in a dictionary in advance.
Similarly
, foreign customers in hair salons can search for pictures of the particular styles they want to precisely express their needs. In conclusion, despite some inconveniences in daily life, there are many ways which do not need intimate knowledge of languages to shorten the distances with strangers. After all, what matters is always the friendly attitude behind one's actions.
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Task Response: Good demonstration of disagreement with the statement. Well-developed argument with relevant examples. Ensure to directly address all parts of the question and maintain a formal style throughout.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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