Computer and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraging as it is good for both empoyers and workers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Nowadays,
amount
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the amount
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of
work
, that made at the distance from the
work place
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workplace
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are
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is
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increasing amazingly.
This
trend
make
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makes
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sense
,
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because
from
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the appearance of
Internet
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the Internet
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, it became easy to
made
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everything at
home
. Most of them are IT
works
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workers
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:
Designer
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designers
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, data
scientist
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scientists
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, game
developer
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developers
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, and
other
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others
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ones
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apply
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.
However
, does
this
good? Let's talk about that. I think
,
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that is
good, because when you
work
at
home
- you
work
better. Yeah, of course, at
home
you don't want to
work
,
however
, everything that you need
are
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is
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at
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in
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your hand.
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, if you need paper to write something,
pen
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a pen
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to
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for
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this
action, or if you need
new
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a new
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mouse,
keyboard
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or keyboard
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you can find or buy it without any problem. Because you know where are every shop, what they sell, or where were located every single object in your house.
Also
, at
home
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,home
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you can
work
anytime you want. To be honest, if you
work
, you don't
work
every single second at
work place
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workplace
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, sometime you just chill, another
time
you
work
, and that cycle repeats. At
home
, you wait until
work
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the work
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list became amazingly big, and when
this
fill
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fills
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up - you start to
work
. Yeah, you can get tired from
amount
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the amount
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of
work
, that you must
to
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apply
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work
, but on the other side, you play hardcore
videogames
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video games
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, walk around the city, watch the cinema, and other
such
things, that need a lot of
time
.
At
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In
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conclusion
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the conclusion
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, I think, that working at
home
is
very
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a very
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good option in near future. Because, when you
work
at
home
you can manage your
time
very efficiently. You can control
time
, so watching
cinema
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the cinema
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,
play
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playing
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something or other hard hobbies became possible, and of course, if you made all
work
at one
time
it became much
more easy
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easier
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to take
overview
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an overview
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,
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apply
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because you know what you wrote.
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