There should be strict laws banning people from taking photographs of people under 18 in order to protect young celebrities and the children of celebrities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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under aged

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youngsters ,

esepecially

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especially

the famous ones, should be protected from

prevert

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prevent

pervert

individuals

by putting laws

for

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not taking any

pictures

of them. Personally, I disagree with

this

notion, because if taking

pictures

of young celebrities were banned, how will they continue as famous

individuals

.

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The main reason why I disagree with

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statement

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,

although

protecting

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famous youngsters is

essential

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an essential

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thing for their safety, the idea of making someone famous is

with

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making him popular throw his

Photos

to make

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people

recognizing

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him as an icon , especially if he was an actor.

Moreover

, young celebrities can get benefits from

this

like increasing their chances of getting popular from a young age and having

a wonderful personal

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a wonderful personal photo

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photos

from

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photographers.Take ,

for example

, my little brother

were

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famous for his visuals but have not got a chance to make himself more popular, but one day some

photos

of my brother from one of his fans got

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in people's feeds on social media which

opend

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opened

opens

open

the doors of brand deals with him from that time.

However

, no one can deny the fact that there

is

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some

preverts

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perverts

prevents

out there who are searching for these

Photos

to

satisfay

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satisfy

their feelings of lust.

Moreover

, some

pedophiles

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take these

Photos

themselves from inappropriate

angels

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.

For instance

, many young

celebrities's

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photos

, specifically

prevert

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prevent

pervert

pictures

, in the UK are sold online in some privet

account

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without them knowing.

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,

regime

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must put rules and fees for these kinds of photographers to prevent them from spreading or even from being there in the first place.

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photos

of

any

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famous

individuals

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part of their life as

a

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famous

individuals

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individual

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most of the time, but when it

is comes

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to

take

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pictures

of

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young ones,

then

it must be under strict rules so that they can be protected from the

pedophiles

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out there.