The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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The following diagram illustrates how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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, it has 5 major steps and it starts with collecting cold water and it ends by producing electricity.

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with, the collected cold water goes 4.5 km pumped down.

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, it injection well and goes to the Geothermal zone (hot rocks). After that, it produces a well and the hot water is pumped up into the condenser and it will become steam.

The next step is

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that the steam is powered by the turbine. The

last

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one is the powered steam goes to the generator and it produces electricity and goes to the geothermal power plant

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NiyoshakhaliliFri Apr 14 2023

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Topic Vocabulary:

geothermal energy
generate electricity
diagram
volcano
magma reservoirs
deep underground
heat
steam
geothermal plant
turbine
condensed
pumped back
underground reservoirs
transmitted
power grid
distribution
continuous
renewable
volcanic activity

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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