The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The following diagram illustrates how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Overall
, it has 5 major steps and it starts with collecting cold water and it ends by producing electricity.
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To begin
with, the collected cold water goes 4.5 km pumped down. Linking Words
Then
, it injection well and goes to the Geothermal zone (hot rocks). After that, it produces a well and the hot water is pumped up into the condenser and it will become steam. Linking Words
The next step is
that the steam is powered by the turbine. The Linking Words
last
one is the powered steam goes to the generator and it produces electricity and goes to the geothermal power plant Linking Words
at the end
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