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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
The two maps illustrate the new settlement of university sports
courts
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 in 1990 compared to the present conversion, There was considerable development of the settlement over these years till now, Glancing at the map reveals that, the park has been replaced with a basketball court, which is located currently in the northwest of the university,
whereas
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 the car park has been transformed into 4 tennis
courts
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instead
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 of two in 1990, which is situated presently in the southwest of the court,
in other words
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, tennis
courts
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 have been expanded from two to four
courts
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, in the southeast tennis
courts
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 have been converted into the fitness club
while
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 the changing room has been enlarged along the fitness club, in the top right corner of the map all the facilities have remained the same without any conversions or enlargement.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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