You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do

Dear Smith, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I wanted to take a moment to thank you for letting me stay over at your house the

last

weekend. I really had a great time spending with you and really appreciate your hospitality. I can't wait for meeting up next occasion. There is,

however

, one thing that I may leave behind at your place. I think I might have left my watch somewhere in your home. It was a blue-coloured watch with a grey strap. The brand of the watch is Fossil, and it has sentimental value to me as it was a gift from my wife. If you happen to come across the watch, could you please let me know kindly

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I would really appreciate it if you could post the item to my address at your convenience. If that's inconvenient for you, I can pick it up at the weekend considering your availability and time. Thanks again for inviting me to a

such

wonderful party. Take care. Best wishes Fazle

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