Being good at math depends more on natural ability than on the quality of teaching they receive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Have you
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that you do not have any talent
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mathematics? It is often argued that talent is more important than teaching quality. I mostly agree with
this
viewpoint because everyone
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been felt their limitation when they were learning
math
in
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school. On the one hand, it is understandable why
people
think teaching is important. First of all, Without learning,
people
can not achieve anything even though they have big gifts.
For example
, if there is a person who has
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body to be a runner. We do not think that
this
person can flower his ability without any learning.
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Furthermore
,
math
has enormous
theoris
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theories
from the ancient and
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stairs.
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people
can not jump up to the next level easily. When we want to calculate plus, we need to know
numbers
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first.
On the other hand
, I think that
math
is affected the most by our own inherent
ability
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abilities
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.
To begin
with, some
people
are interested in numbers or patterns of nature without education. They just can
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understand
the phenomenon and solve problems in
math
. It means
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quantity
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the quantity
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of effort is totally different when we study
this
subject. For
instant
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, I have a
firend
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friend
who
are
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really good at
math
. He just glanced and find the result when I was writing lots of
numers
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numbers
on the whole paper.
Moreover
, there are many examples that uneducated
person
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people
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who
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we call a
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genius
found or proved
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in
mathmatical
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mathematical
area
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. In conclusion, we can not
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that curriculum is
essential
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part
to
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being
a
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good at
math
, but I believe that innate gifts
effect
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much more than that.
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