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In many countries people have to go away from their family and friends to find work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In many parts of the world,
people
 have to migrate from their family members and fellow friends in order to find a suitable
job
. In my opinion,
this
 trend is both beneficial and
detremental
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detrimental
 in equal measure. To start, some of the advantages of working far away from home
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are worth mentioning. Earning more salary would be
main
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 advantage.
In other words
, if someone from
countryside
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 is migrating to a city in
a
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pursuit of a
job
, cities would be
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 option.
This
 is because the quality of jobs in megapolises is much better since in most cases it offers appropriate training before starting
a work
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.
Furthermore
,
people
 may become independent. They learn to take a lead in most situations, which is really positive down the line.
However
, leaving family and peers for a
job
,
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 does pose problems, if looked
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 a different perspective. The main argument here is homesickness. To elaborate,
according to
 one of the scientific
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 about the effects of studying and working on
people
.
Scientist
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 identified that 80% of
people
 suffer from homesickness.
Also
, It might be really challenging for
people
 to adapt to
new
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place
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. It will take more than a week to get on well with the new work and fellow workers.
Moreover
, the main argument here is home In conclusion, leaving family members and peers for a
job
 has both pros and cons.
While
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hand
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, it can create leaders and independent
people
,
on the other hand
, it might
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 problems like missing family members
as well as
 the time it requires to adapt to a new place.
That is
 why,
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 believe that it is as much a change for the better as it is for the worse
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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