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In past people feel difference in foreign culture. Nowadays, this situation is changed. What are the causes of these chnages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadavtages?

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In previous eras, foreign cultures might not be easy for some groups of
people
 to associate with.
On the other hand
, our
society
 has been changing for several reasons.
This
 essay will elaborate on it and points out the advantages of
this
 situation.
To begin
 with, today's
people
 are more welcome to a variety of other cultures because of two main reasons.
Firstly
, as a population boom in each country or
society
,
people
 relocate from place to place and one community are multicultural.
As a result
,
this
 situation is conducive to exchanging culture and tradition among a variety of
people
.
Secondly
, social media play a key role in human communication these days, and it helps individuals to approach strangers straightforwardly.
For example
, children play online games in order to entertain themselves but they can
also
 find
new
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 friend who is from the other side of the world.
According to
 these causes, social mindsets will change from bewaring new things to opening to learn the differences. Positive impacts from
this
 circumstance would be low conflicts and a flexible lifestyle. If
people
 understand and do not have a bias against other cultures, they tend to get along well with foreigners and are open-mind when they have to communicate with international
people
.
In addition
, working or studying in a multicultural
society
 can build adaptation skills.
For instance
, the working style of Japanese employees is strict and well-organized all the time,
while
 Thai workers are more relaxed in order to conduct a productive outcome. When they work together, the final result will be successful with a satisfied working style.
To conclude
, the world now has changed to be more multicultural
due to
 the variety of
people
 in one
society
 and the power of social media. I strongly believe that
this
 phenomenon has benefits for human beings and outweighs potential negative effects.
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