the given below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The line chart gives information about the rate of four different selected materials (paper & cardboard, glass containers,
aluminum
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cans, and plastic) that were recycled over the course of 1982 to 2010
in particular
nations.
Overall
,
it is clear that
paper and cardboard are
material
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materials
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that had recycled successfully among the other kinds
thorughout
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throughout
the
period
,
eventhough
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even though
experienced
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declined
about
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in
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the
last
two decades but it was not significant.
In contrast
, the
platics
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plastics
become
a
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least material that could be recycled.
To begin
with, in 1982, paper and cardboard
had
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started with the highest number of
aroun
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around
65% and peaked at 80% in 1990 before gradually
declined
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until the end of the
period
reaching 70%.
In addition
,
gass
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gas
containers
also
had
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fluctuation
by
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reaching 50% in 1982 and
fall
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moderately to 40% slightly increased 10% to 50% by 1994.
However
, it rose moderately to the year 2010 and accounted for 60%.
In contrast
,
the
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aluminumium
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aluminium
cans and plastics
had
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constantly increased during the
period
. Both materials began with only about 5% and 4% respectively in
year
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the year
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1986.
However
,
alumunium
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aluminium
cans rose significantly to the end of the
period
which reached approximately 45%.
On the other hand
, plastics increase gradually and only reach about 9% in 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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