There is no doubt that these days many
kids
use
the
technologies
in a lot of countries. The question is, What
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the
they will get it? Is it
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when they employ the
? In
this
, I am going to draw the features and the
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drawback.
In terms of advantages, They will take
much Correct quantifier usage
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time
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the phone or computer. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that
children
will have many hours
frontChange preposition
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of the
technologiesFix the agreement mistake
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and
this
will make them tired. To illustrate,
Kids
will have overweight and they will get weak in their eyes. In
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, The
technologies
will industry them.
Moreover
, now the
technologies
have some issues when the
children
use
itCorrect pronoun usage
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and
this
will be
for the parents
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because the parents ought to block the phone when the
children
use
it. In
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, The parents have to get their
kids
out
homeChange preposition
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.
However
, The
children
will get some benefits.
Firstly
, The computer will help them to study,
In other words
, they will have
newCorrect article usage
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.
Secondly
, The phone will improve their skills,
This
is because
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The
kids
will play
games and that will give them some skills.
it will develop their
,
For example
, the games will
them to solve some problems.
In conclusion,
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technologies
will improve in the future and that will have more advantages
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