The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.
The bar chart depicts data about the difficulties that individuals faced during their lives in foreign countries.
Overall
,
while
younger people struggled with socializing and finding their accommodations, the older did with local languages. First of all, people aged 18-34 mainly had social and housing issues. By way of an example, 46% of them faced difficulties in making friends, which was the biggest challenge among them.
As well as
this
, the percentage of finding a place to live accounted for 40%.
However
, they relatively could have their mates easily. Only 29% of them did not do it well.
Conversely
, the common issue among the over-55 age group was mastering the local language rather than the other. More than 50% of them answered that was hard to deal with. (54%)
On the other hand
, they tended to handle making their accompanies and settling in their places. (23% and 22%, respectively)
Furthermore
, people whose ages were between 35 and 54 did not have noticeable trends.
In other words
, each issue consisted of around one-third. (36% in making friends, 39% in finding somewhere to live and 35% in learning the local language.)
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