A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear John,
I'm writing to provide you with suggestions based on my past experiences so that you can have a great summer vacation.
I'm aware of your hectic routine that's why I told you multiple times to take a break from your work
this
will not only give you some time to relax but also
you will enjoy the natural beauty. Moreover
, camping is a great idea to connect with nature where you can enjoy picturesque scenery while
cooking, eating, and talking with your friends at a bonfire.
However
, there are a few downsides to camping. First,
you may be required to acclimatise yourself according to
the weather else you will catch a cold for that reason you should wear warm clothes. Then
, public toilets are mostly unhygienic. Last
, remote sites are expensive. Therefore
, these are a few challenges you are gonna face.
As
It's been a long since I went on a vacation and you are planning for it. Correct word choice
apply
Hence
, definitely, I will join you and we will have fun together.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
BenSubmitted by Haris Khan on
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Be mindful of grammatical range and accuracy in order to avoid minor errors that could impede fluency.
Task Achievement
Make certain that the main purpose of the letter is maintained throughout, to ensure your advice on camping is helpful and relevant.
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