The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The first chart gives information on the proportion of how many bottles of
Coca-Cola
are sold in 5 different regions. Also
, the second chart indicates the change of
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in
Coca-cola's
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Coca-Cola's
sharing
prices from 1996 to 2001.
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share
Overall
, 30.4% of Coca-cola
bottles which is the largest are purchased in North America. Cerncerning
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Concerning
price
, the year when Coca-cola
bottles were bought at the highest price
was 1998.
Looking at the first graph, the figure for North America accounted the
biggest proportion at 30.4% which is nearly twice as large as that for Asia followed by that for Latin America at 25.7%. Change preposition
for the
On the other hand
, the
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apply
Coca-cola
pets were sold at 7% in Africa and Middle
East, which is the smallest and approximately half of the percentage of volume in Asia at 16.4%.
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the Middle
According to
the second graph, the price
of Coca-cola
was around 40$ in 1996, which was the lowest price
in this
graph. It started to soar roughly from 40$ to 70$ by 1997. However
, since 1997, it's
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its
price
fluctuated until 2001. It peaked Change preposition
at the
the
highest point at 80$ in 1998. Despite a minimal increase in 2000, it had a downward trend from 1998 to 2001 and hit the second cheapest point at about 48$ in 2000.Change the word
its
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