A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

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letter to apply

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in your museum. I am happy to get a chance to work there. I am a university student who is studying

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my career to be a docent in

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museum in the future.

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job and apply to your museum.

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my major, I have basic knowledge about artists and

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, I like children and have great

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. I think I can explain well to the visitors and make them

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, nowadays, I spend break time like a gap year for me, so I have enough time to work there. Even from the next week, I can start to work. If you are looking for a person who

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positive response soon. Yours sincerely Hera

HeraSat Apr 15 2023

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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