A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Deam

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Dear

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Sir or Madam Hello. I am writing

this

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letter to apply

volunteer

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to volunteer

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in your museum. I am happy to get a chance to work there. I am a university student who is studying

the

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apply

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Art

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However

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I am considering

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my career to be a docent in

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art

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museum in the future.

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the reason why I want to experience

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job and apply to your museum.

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my major, I have basic knowledge about artists and

history

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the history

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art

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, I like children and have great

patient

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. I think I can explain well to the visitors and make them

instrested

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interested

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, nowadays, I spend break time like a gap year for me, so I have enough time to work there. Even from the next week, I can start to work. If you are looking for a person who

truely

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truly

loves

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, you should consider

about

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me. I hope

you

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positive response soon. Yours sincerely Hera

Hera

Apr 15, 2023

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