The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

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The bar graph gives information about how many

incidents

and

injuries

occurred when using 5 different means of public transportation in the year 2002.

Overall

, most

incidents

and

injuries

took place on demand response vehicles.

By contrast

, commuter

rail

services recorded by far the lowest figures in 2002. the total number of

incidents

taking place on demand response transport services is higher than that of

injuries

, with respective figures being 225 and 173. Dramatic differences were seen in the number of

incidents

and those who were injured by using commuter

rail

, which

was

Correct subject-verb agreement

were

show examples

only 20 and 17 respectively. As for heavy

rail

, there were 51

incidents

occurring in

this

transport type,

while

only 35 passengers got

injuries

. 76

incidents

were recorded on both light

rail

and bus services. There were 39 injured people using light

rail

service, and these figures were nearly twice as low as those being bus users.

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