The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
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The bar graph gives information about how many
incidents
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and
injuries
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occurred when using 5 different means of public transportation in the year 2002.
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, most
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and
injuries
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took place on demand response vehicles.
By contrast
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, commuter
rail
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services recorded by far the lowest figures in 2002. the total number of
incidents
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taking place on demand response transport services is higher than that of
injuries
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, with respective figures being 225 and 173. Dramatic differences were seen in the number of
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and those who were injured by using commuter
rail
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only 20 and 17 respectively. As for heavy
rail
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, there were 51
incidents
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occurring in
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transport type,
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only 35 passengers got
injuries
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. 76
incidents
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were recorded on both light
rail
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and bus services. There were 39 injured people using light
rail
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service, and these figures were nearly twice as low as those being bus users.
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