The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
The bar graph gives information about how many
incidents
and
injuries
occurred when using 5 different means of public transportation in the year 2002.
Overall
, most
incidents
and
injuries
took place on demand response vehicles.
By contrast
, commuter
rail
services recorded by far the lowest figures in 2002. the total number of
incidents
taking place on demand response transport services is higher than that of
injuries
, with respective figures being 225 and 173. Dramatic differences were seen in the number of
incidents
and those who were injured by using commuter
rail
, which
was
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only 20 and 17 respectively. As for heavy
rail
, there were 51
incidents
occurring in
this
transport type,
while
only 35 passengers got
injuries
. 76
incidents
were recorded on both light
rail
and bus services. There were 39 injured people using light
rail
service, and these figures were nearly twice as low as those being bus users.
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