the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeb 2011 and 2018

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depicts some information about the

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of closures and openings of stores in the 7-year

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from 2011 to 2018.

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can be ostensibly seen, both the new

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and the closed ones'

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experienced a dramatic decline over these 7 years,

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the

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of closures at the beginning of the

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is lower than the openings meanwhile there is a reverse effect

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of the

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which is related to new stores,

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starts with 8500 numbers where there are 2000 more new

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compared to closed ones in 2011

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after some fluctuation in

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there is the same 2000 amount but decreased from closures and reaches to 3000

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in 2018. In 2014 the

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of openings and closings are almost the same around the

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of 6000. the

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witnesses the lowest amount of

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closed

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in the year 2015 around 500.