You recently received a letter from a friend asking for an advice about whether to go to school ir try to get a job. You think he/she skould get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would to enjoy going to college. •expalin why getting a kob is a good idea for him. •suggest type of job that would be suitable for him/her.

Hello Kasia,  I am writing
this
letter to advise you asked me through your letter that you're in a dilemma
whether
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about whether
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to go to college or start a
job
. I think you should start doing a
job
instead
of
further
studies
.
First,
I'
ll
tell you why not choose to do
studies
as it will be expensive as compared to what you'
ll
learn. College
studies
are totally theoretical, which means, no skill development and less exposure.
On the other hand
, starting work right after school have many benefits as you'
ll
start earning money at an early age and you'
ll
have more freedom to do shopping. Keeping the fun part aside, a
Job
will help you to find your hidden skills and talents, and
also
will help in polishing them, which will
further
help in deciding the future plans for your higher
studies
. I've noticed you have excellent communication skills, I think jobs like receptionist and call centre you look for. I am sure you'
ll
have a great time doing
this
type of
job
. I hope you'
ll
like the advice and looking forward to seeing you soon. All the best for your future. Warm regards, Jaskirat
kaur
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