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Discuss the disadvantages of eating fast food on health. Why do people eat fast food? What can be done to discourage it?

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Having junky
food
 in a daily diet has a bad impact on people’s lives and themselves. Unfortunately, society does not put too much attention to what problems it can create, as it is too delicious and addictive.
However
, we should take the matter into our hands and make
this
 kind of
food
 less available to purchase, around the world. No matter how tasty fast
food
 may be, it is extremely unhealthy for the human body. People think, feeding ourselves with
such
food
 is amazing and make us feel delightful.
However
, eating it
,
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 develops a bad habit and may conclude in
having
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serious health issues. Which may result in obesity or a heart attack.
Moreover
, junky
food
 is not nutritious and does not include the sufficient vitamins that the human body needs to survive and develop in a proper way. Unfortunately, not many have
such
 knowledge.
Also
, the act of
discourage
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 to eat
such
 fast
food
 must be put into the minds who eat that regularly. The world should spread more awareness of what may happen to them if they do not start taking care of themselves. Diet is a sufficient part of our lives and it affects us a lot.
That is
 why fast-
food
 shops should be less available.
As a result
, humanity would not be as tempted to feed
themselves
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 with
such
 unhealthy
food
. There is a saying "You become what you eat".
The
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Society should reflect on it more often, as there are too many people who eat fast
food
 on daily basis. It has too many disadvantages as it creates a big risk to their health which is quite dangerous.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unhealthy
  • obesity
  • nutrients
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • addictive
  • convenience
  • time constraints
  • marketed
  • accessible
  • regulations
  • availability
  • dependence
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