Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the current age,

technology

become affordable and

avalibal

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available

which

lead

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many

people

doing

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their

work

from home and

trnsfer

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transfer

their children's education system to be online .

However

, I am

staunch

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believer that using

cutting edge

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technology

to achieve

people

's tasks has a beneficial impact on their lives.

First,

using developed

technology

supports workers and students to avoid

daily

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commute.

In other words

, if

people

use online platforms to achieve their

work

and study, it will save plenty of consumed time in transportation.

This

time can be spent

to have

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fun with their families,

that

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would build strong relationships among

family's

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member

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, and

this

would have a positive effect on their

work

performance .

This

can be exemplified in the "Google"

technology

company

,

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when

had

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decided to give their worker the option to

work

from home or

company

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, they

have

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found

employee's

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employees'

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performance

are

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increased when they start working from their home.

Hence

, working stability and flexibility could lead to more achievement for any company.

Second,

proffesional

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professional

education schools are overpriced normally and

with

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using

technology

that could let them

be

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more

accessable

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accessible

for many

people

.

This

means if schools transfer their system to become online, that will

signaficantly

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significantly

reduce the operational and maintenance cost.

For example

, "Khan

Acadimy

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Academy

" is an international educational organization which does not have a building

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and all their

teaches

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teachers

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from around the world.

Therefore

,

technology

enabled getting a high educational level from different

background

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backgrounds

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with

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at

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lower

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a lower

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cost. In conclusion, depending on

technology

to be a vital part of

people

's lives has many advantages which will open various opportunities for

people

and

this

is what I believe.