Write about the following topic. Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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verbal communication
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Because
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employ
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when they want to
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talk
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,supervisor and director following the public way of
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melted
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disappearance
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and
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identity over
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of time .
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meaningful
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strong grammar
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residents
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it
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method to
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of them
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direction
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less effective .
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language
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used
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