The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1
The bar chart compares the number of
sites
visited by Internet users in Canada in 2014 and 2015
I glanced at the graph referrals percentage of people using four and five-site sites
almost doubled in the period
for further
information, the number of individuals using one site peaked in 2014 at 36 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
decreased in 2015 to 28%
moreover
, Internet users registered to sites
in 2014 is 23% and almost the same in 2015
meanwhile, those who used three sites
were nearly half in 2014 for 12%,
and 16% in 2015
Remove the comma
apply
on the other hand
, it's clear that users who did not use any social networking sites
slightly fell from 22% in 2014 to 21% in 2015Submitted by ihanenn1 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sites with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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