The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables present the agreed-upon fair
sales
prices for two products,
coffee
and bananas, between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Overall
,
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
figures
for both bananas and
coffee
in 1999. By 2004, an exponential rise in banana
sales
was observed in
Switzerland
,
while
coffee
sales
saw a significant
increase
in the
UK
.
Sweden
,
Belgium
, and
Denmark
had relatively low prices for both products. In 1999,
Switzerland
received the highest pay for
coffee
, at 3
million
, and experienced a 100%
increase
after a 5-year period. The
UK
initially
had the third-highest
coffee
sales
figures
(1.5
million
), but by 2004, the figure surged to 20
million
.
Denmark
was the second highest in 1999, with 1.8
million
, but only grew slightly to 2
million
.
Belgium
and
Sweden
had similar
sales
figures
, ranging from 1 to 1.7
million
and 0.8 to 1
million
, respectively, with the latter having the lowest figure. Turning to bananas,
Switzerland
saw a considerable
increase
in fair trade
sales
, rising from 15
million
to 47
million
within a 4-year period. In 1999 and 2004,
Denmark
,
Sweden
, the
UK
, and
Belgium
had
sales
figures
ranging from approximately 0.6
million
to 2
million
.
However
, there was a significant
increase
in 2004 in the
UK
(5.5
million
),
Belgium
(4
million
), and
Sweden
(1
million
),
while
Denmark
experienced a drop in
sales
figures
to 0.9
million
.
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  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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