Some people believe that we succeed in sport do to our inborn talent. Others argue that continues working on oneself is a key success. What do you think?

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Unquestionably every coin has two sides and so are the

people

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.society's

people

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are divided into two groups and

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sports

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have become a topic of debate among

people

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.some individuals have thought regarding

sports

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, which they think that sport is the born

talent

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while

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others reject

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notion and think that with hard

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we can achieve anything and make the path to success.

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essay will compare are contrast both opinions

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my opinion which is in the favour of former view will be discussed in a sensible conclusion. Initiating with the points supporting the first school of thought,

firstly

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those

people

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who have

talent

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in their roots are known to be more successful persons. The

people

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who support

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say that the person who brought with

talent

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will make them proud of their family

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their belonging nation.

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, In India, it is a fact that a player's son would be a player in future, because that the ancient culture towards

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, if someone has born brought

talent

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regarding

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, there is no doubt that that person now everything about

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as well as

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how to play a specific game.

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,they are working on it for a starting period of time. On the contrasting side,

people

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who held another viewpoint say that hard

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is a must for any path to success.

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,They believe that without hard

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inborn skills diminished over time.

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, a well-known player Cristiano Ronaldo achieved his goal with hard

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and courage. He doesn't have any born expertise in football.

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,he just choose the path and did

work

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on himself.

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but not least, practice makes a man perfect, so with

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courage is required.

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, I would like to say that, there is no doubt that geniuses are a blessing but hard

work

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is the basic requirement that every person should have.

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, it will depend upon the mindset of the

people

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that which view they are in favour of.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Describe a process of geothermal power plant ? What is the diagram of? How many steps are there? What happens in each step? What are the components, or parts of the process? Is the process mechanical or natural, or both? Where does the process start? Where does it finish?