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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have differing opinions
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how the progress of a country should be measured. Some argue that the most desirable aim for
governments
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 is to make the
economy
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 sustainable,
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 others think other developments
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 much important as a thriving
economy
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. I am, personally, in
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 of
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 view. On the one hand, it can be never denied that a strong
economy
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 can result in job creation,
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high level of employment and
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 can
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 pay high salaries to
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 citizens. At the same time, with the advent of
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economic progress,
governments
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 could invest in several infrastructures, where funding is
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 needed.
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, a healthy
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 can lead to an improved transportation network, education system, hospital facilities and public services.
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, in terms of political influence and trading power, a country could raise its
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 rank on a global scope with the help of an advanced
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, there are other forms of principal improvements, which are as significant as
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 factors mentioned above. From a social standpoint, we should consider the areas of democracy, human rights, justice and equality, when judging the progress of a country.
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, a success of a nation could be measured by looking at people’s sense of satisfaction, health, happiness and well-being. Another key consideration has to do with how well
governments
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 protect their environment, whether it is moving forward
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environmental sustainability. In conclusion,
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economic growth is by no means important,
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, I believe that social, health and environmental criteria are equally significant.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic stability
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Infrastructure
  • Technological advancement
  • Social cohesion
  • Healthcare accessibility
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Cultural heritage
  • National identity
  • Balanced development
  • Long-term benefits
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