Some people think the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think it is causing the opposite side effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals argue that the current

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has been increasing the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor. Meanwhile, others believe that

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can narrow

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income inequality.

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essay intends to analyze both views. I,

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, side with the latter view. On the one hand, there are various reasons why

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think that

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can enlarge the

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between the rich and the poor.

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with, some technological discoveries and devices are merely for the affluent because of financial matters.

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, there are several methods of

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related to chronic diseases or cancers which have required

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extremely expensive cost of drugs and medical services. There is no doubt that poor

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can not afford them.

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, some cutting-edge technologies have been applied to create machines which have

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purpose to replace the

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force and optimize the operation cost.

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, the profit of rich owners will gradually increase,

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the poor will lose their jobs and become poorer. In fact, there is not a gradual increase in

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real wages in developed nations during the past few decades. On the one hand, those have the firm belief that

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provides numerous benefits for poor

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can reduce the

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between them and rich

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.

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, Through information on social networks or online newspapers, poor

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who are stuck in extremely difficult situations

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can get

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prompt help from charity organizations,

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and governments

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to increase their

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standards and have better educations.

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is one of the most effective platforms to help authorities solve issues about the lack of electricity, pure water and skilled workers in the countryside. I do believe that

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is not the main reason for increasing the

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between rich

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and poor

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. The real reason for

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issue is the lack of regulations about how to use

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equality

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, not only serve

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the elites.

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, there should be a fixed affordable price for all life-saving medicines or

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medical technologies to help

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use modern medical treatments without falling into poverty after taking dangerous diseases. In short,

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can provide a significant value to decrease the

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between the rich and the poor. In fact, The way

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technology

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is

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main cause

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increasing the

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between different social classes.